The graph below shows changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.
The bar chart demonstrates the proportions of
household
that possessed Fix the agreement mistake
households
car
in one Europe country in the interval between 1971 and 2001.
Fix the agreement mistake
cars
Overall
, the percentage
of families that had cars witnessed an upward trend, while
the proportion of households that owned no car
declined in the given period. In addition
, houses with no car
was the most popular at the beginning but was surpassed by one-car
owner in
the end of the interval.
At Change the preposition
at
first,
the proportion of households voided of private cars initially
dominated at around 48%. In the next two decades, it decreased significantly by approximately 18%. Then
the percentage
fell slightly from almost 30% to 28% in 2001.
Furthermore
, the percentage
of families hate
that had one Verb problem
apply
car
indicates a strongly decreased
from about 47% to 21% in the first twenty years. Replace the word
strong decrease
However
, the proportion rose dramatically in 2001 and resulted in around 43%. Meanwhile, the percentage
of household
Fix the agreement mistake
households
possessed
two or more cars rocketed at the beginning first two decades and peaked with Correct pronoun usage
that possessed
the
Correct article usage
a
percentage
about
47%. Change preposition
of about
Then
it experienced a suddenly declined
Replace the word
sudden decline
by
approximately 28% by the end of the figure.Change preposition
of
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