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The graph below shows changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

The graph below shows changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.
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The bar chart demonstrates the proportions of
household
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households
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 that possessed
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car
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cars
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 in one Europe country in the interval between 1971 and 2001.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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 of families that had cars witnessed an upward trend,
while
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 the proportion of households that owned no
car
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 declined in the given period.
In addition
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, houses with no
car
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 was the most popular at the beginning but was surpassed by one-
car
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 owner
in
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 the end of the interval. At
first,
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the proportion of households voided of private cars
initially
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 dominated at around 48%. In the next two decades, it decreased significantly by approximately 18%.
Then
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 the
percentage
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 fell slightly from almost 30% to 28% in 2001.
Furthermore
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, the
percentage
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 of families
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that had one
car
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 indicates a
strongly decreased
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 from about 47% to 21% in the first twenty years.
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, the proportion rose dramatically in 2001 and resulted in around 43%. Meanwhile, the
percentage
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 of
household
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households
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possessed
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 two or more cars rocketed at the beginning first two decades and peaked with
the
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a
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percentage
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about
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 47%.
Then
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 it experienced a
suddenly declined
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by
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 approximately 28% by the end of the figure.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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