The chart below shows the changes in percentage for household cars in a European Country between 1971 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Provided is the bar graph comparing the percentage of
cars
ownership in a European nation’s households being surveyed across 3 decades from 1971.
As is shown, there was a visible shift in car possession through the years as families began to purchase more automobiles; Change the noun form
car
however
, they preferred to have a solitary vehicle rather than multiple ones in the garage.
With an in-depth look at the first decade, it is evident that the proportion of households voided of private cars initially
dominated at around 5%, but was progressively reduced by roughly 1% a decade later. Following
this
bracket were houses owning a single vehicle at approximately 3.5% in 1971, which subsequently
saw a slight reduction by
0.5% in 1981. Interestingly, the percentage of families with multiple automobiles bucked the trend with the climb from well below 2% from the start to about 3% within 10 years.
Moving forward to the second half of the diagram, the figure for Change preposition
of
one-car
bracket not only jumped to a staggering peak of 5% in 1991 but Correct article usage
the one-car
also
equalized that of the no-car group
2 decades past. As the new century ushered in, the growth decelerated by 1%. Similarly
, the figures for multiple
cars Correct article usage
the multiple
group
regained its
momentum after experiencing a 1% dip from 1981 to 1991 yet lagged behind the one-car Correct pronoun usage
their
group
, ending at about 3% of total
. Add an article
the total
Lastly
, the data for no-car
Correct article usage
the no-car
group
remained plateau
in the Wrong verb form
plateaued
last
decade, also
at 3%.Submitted by jessiegp0203 on
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