The bar charts shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar charts shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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The bar graph illustrates the first 10 countries
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the amount of electricity they created and used the most in 2014.
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, China and the US by far both created and used the most electricity energy. The Republic of Korea created and consumed the least and
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least four were under
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level and relatively close to each other. Germany was the only country
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its production exceeded its use. The Republic of China produced and used the most energy with just
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under
5,4
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and just over 5,3
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, respectively and these numbers are followed by the US with just over 4 thousand
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of production and under
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number of consumption. Germany produced more energy than it used in 2014 and the least production and consumption was in Korea with both being under half of a thousand
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. Russia created over a thousand
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and used a little more than that number and with India being the highest, the gap between creation and consumption was relatively larger than Russia and Japan in other countries. India, France, Canada and Brazil all used under 900
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and, except India, produced under 500
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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