The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagrams illustrate how the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the United

Kingdom

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deal with dangerous

waste

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products. As

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general trend, we can notice that undergrounding is used in all three countries. It could be noticed that the Republic of Korea and Sweden use the same methods in order to deal with

waste

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including recycling, undergrounding and incineration. Only the United

Kingdom

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uses chemical treatment and dumping at sea, but at the same time, it is the only country which does not recycle dangerous misuse. As presented in the pie charts, undergrounding is the most popular method in the United

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and Sweden (82% and 55% respectively).

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, in the Republic of Korea, 69% of dangerous

waste

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is recycled

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the rest of the misuse is rather being undergrounded (22%) or incinerated (9%).

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, we can see that chemical treatment is not very popular and only 8% of

waste

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is utilized by

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method in the United

Kingdom

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. The same can be said about dumping at sea which reaches the same 8% and is

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used only in the United

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. At the same time,

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methods as undergrounding, incineration and recycling are spread widely over different countries.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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