the map below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planned future development of the site.

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maps provide information about a future plan for a site in the town of Norbiton which is currently designated as an industrial area.

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, there will be a demolition in factories. The areas which encompassed the factories will be converted completely into a residential area.

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the future map,

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junctions will be constructed with five roads that will encompass houses. There amenities

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as shops and a medical centre will be constructed between the junctions. The river will include a bridge which goes to a dwelling. At the northeast of the map, there will be a playground situated between the

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residential blocks.

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, the area that currently belongs to a factory will be replaced with a school. The farmland will be divided into

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parts, and only the northeast portion of the farmland will remain.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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140 words

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infrastructure
warehouse
factory
green space
traffic flow
environmental impact
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the map below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planned future development of the site.

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Wealthy nations should asssit poorer countries with humanitarien relief during natural disasters

Organizing a large family celebrations, such as a wedding can often create problems. What can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solutions can you suggest?

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