the map below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planned future development of the site.

the map below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planned future development of the site.
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The
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maps provide information about a future plan for a site in the town of Norbiton which is currently designated as an industrial area.
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, there will be a demolition in factories. The areas which encompassed the factories will be converted completely into a residential area.
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the future map,
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junctions will be constructed with five roads that will encompass houses. There amenities
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as shops and a medical centre will be constructed between the junctions. The river will include a bridge which goes to a dwelling. At the northeast of the map, there will be a playground situated between the
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residential blocks.
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, the area that currently belongs to a factory will be replaced with a school. The farmland will be divided into
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parts, and only the northeast portion of the farmland will remain.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • infrastructure
  • warehouse
  • factory
  • green space
  • traffic flow
  • environmental impact
  • employment opportunities
  • stakeholders
  • modernize
  • comply
  • regulations
  • projection
  • expansion
  • upgrade
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