A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in computer age has more advantages than disadvantages?

A lot of

people

have become dependent on

techology

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technology

. I believe that

technology

considerably improved human life and at the same

time

did the opposite. In

this

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I will discuss and give a couple of examples for both my views

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and why I believe that the benefits are greater than the downfalls. On the

one

hand,

technology

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reduced all

sort

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sorts

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of human interaction,

for

example

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example,

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kids spend more

time

watching tv or playing on tablets

instead

of enjoying

time

outdoor

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with friends,

therefore

, communication and interaction

is

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set to become a major

issue

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within the new generation, who mostly suffer of

lonliness

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loneliness

and difficulties in approaching and interacting with other

people

. Another negative consequence of

technology

is the loss of employment; just by looking at groceries shops,

machines

replaced

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cashiers, or in the automotive businesses, cars were once

ensambled

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ensembled

enabled

by humans,

nowdays

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just by

machines

. We could argue about the fact that there are humans controlling the

machines

, but,

while

one

person is enough to check on the machine

that is

building a whole car, in the past there were ten labour hands doing the job.

On the other hand

, I believe that

technology

drastically improved our quality of life.

For example

, I can see that first hand in my job, I am a bookkeeper, everything was done on paper before that and it caused: loss of

time

, incredible waste of paper, and

moreover

left space

to

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errors and inaccuracy. The introduction of calculators and computers and with

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them

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spreadsheets, made

bookkeepers

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job

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easier,

accurate

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, and more likeable. Another positive improvement is the

one

in the health system, the invention of many technologies that can diagnose some illnesses, radiations that can kill cancer cells,

machines

that can keep

people

alive when they

temporarly

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temporarily

can't themselves and so on. In Conclusion, the benefits of

technology

are greater than the negative impact on

people

, the negative outcomes are easily avoidable with a change in our attitude towards it. Parents

for example

could allow kids only

one

hour of

tv

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TV

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or tablets per day and have their kids

to

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spend more

time

outdoor

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doing activities with

school mates

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schoolmates

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. In the work environment, employers could choose technologies that support workers

instead

of ones that replace them. We have the power to make

technology

only beneficial to us just by

doing

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some small changes in our everyday life.