the bar chart shows the percentage change in the share of international students among universityy garduated in dofferent canadain provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.

the bar chart shows the percentage change in the share of international students among universityy garduated in dofferent canadain provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.
The bar graph illustrates the rate of international alumni in eight different provincial universities in Canada between 2001 and 2006. The figures are presented in percentages per area.
Overall
, there has been a sharp increase in
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number of of international degree holders in a five-year span.It is
also
clear that New
Brunswick
has the highest product of scholars among provinces,
while
Ontario has the least. Among all Canadian universities in 2001, New
Brunswick
had the highest number of alumni which is around 8 %. Followed by Nova Scotia with over 7 %,
whereas
Ontario has the lowest product just 3 %.
By comparison
, New
Brunswick
had almost double the number of graduates. A similar, pattern can be observed in the 2006 degree holder New
Brunswick
has the top rating with 12%. Next to it are Nova Scotia and British Columbia with over 10 %. Meanwhile, Ontario still possesses the lowest product of students with just over 5 % which is half of the alumni in New
Brunswick
.
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