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Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages; therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the development of modern information technologies, the demand for computers is increasing. In the modern world of the moment, we can easily speak them in their language by travelling to the desired state, since there are translator computers. We can learn different languages without leaving home through translator computers. What we do with campers will be easy.
For example
, you are going on the street, and a person from abroad can buy
nurse
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a nurse
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. but the seller does not understand the man.
nevertheless
, the seller took his computer in his hands, and an interpreter entered . After that, the seller spoke easily with the man and sold his items to him. The use of campers,
as well as
 the two sides of the coin, has its bad sides.nowadays, people remain attached to translators, and
this
 is very bad. You should not trust the computer. As
this
 technology can be broken without trust.
therefore
, many people want to learn the language themselves and not rely on a translator
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structure
Ensure your essay has a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. The introduction should briefly present the topic and your position. The conclusion should summarize the main points and restate your position.
coherence
Work on developing a logical flow between ideas and paragraphs. Use linking words and phrases to connect ideas and paragraphs, making it easy for the reader to follow your argument.
task response
Address the task directly and develop your points with specific examples and explanations. Make sure your position on the statement is clear throughout the essay.
language
Improve clarity by carefully reviewing and correcting grammatical errors and inaccuracies in language use. This will make your argument more persuasive and easier to understand.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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