THE MAIN CAUSE OF GLOBAL WARMING IS POLLUTION FROM CARS. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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MODERN ERA, POLLUTION FROM

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CAN BE THE MAJOR

CAUSE

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OF GLOBAL WARMING. IN MY SOLID OPINION, I PARTIALLY SUPPORT

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VIEW

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BECAUSE

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CARS

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, THERE ARE OTHER ESSENTIAL FACTORS THAT PLAY IMPORTANT ROLE IN GLOBAL WARMING.

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WITH, EXHAUST FROM

CARS

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CAN BE A VITAL

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OF GLOBAL WARMING.

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DUE TO

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THE FACT THAT TODAY, RISES IN THE NUMBER OF VEHICLES ENTIRE THE WORLD DAMAGE SOME FACTORS WHICH ARE THE BEGINNING OF THE GLOBAL WARMING.

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A SURVEY OF BELGIAN CITIZENS,

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OF USING ELECTRIC

CARS

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, INDIVIDUALS TEND TO USE

CARS

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WHICH WORK WITH GASOLINE WHICH DAMAGE THE ATMOSPHERE,

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LAYER, LAKES, AND FORESTS AND TRIGGERS OTHER DANGEROUS CAUSES. EXHAUST FROM

CARS

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AFFECTS BOTH FAUNA AND FLORA IN FORESTS, AND LAKES, AND INFLUENCES TO HABITATS OF ANIMALS. IF

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PROBLEM IS REMOVED FROM THE WORLD BY SWITCHING TO ELECTRIC

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OR PANEL

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, ONE OF THE MOST VITAL PARAMETERS WILL DISAPPEAR FROM THE WORLD. REGARDING THE OTHER INCENTIVES, HUMAN ACTIVITY IS THE

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OF INCREASED GREENHOUSE GAS CONCENTRATIONS. SPECIFICALLY, THERE ARE SOME ACTS WHICH ARE TAKEN BY HUMANS THAT CAN

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GLOBAL WARMING.

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, OVER THE

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CENTURY, THE BURNING OF FOSSIL FUELS LIKE COAL AND OIL HAS INCREASED THE CONCENTRATION OF ATMOSPHERIC CARBON DIOXIDE.

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,THE BUILDING OF NEW FACTORIES OR BUILDINGS SHOULD BE THE VISIBLE PROBLEMS WHICH AFFECT TO ENVIRONMENT WITH THEIR WASTES. IN SUM,

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IT SEEMS THAT

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ARE THE ONLY FACTOR FOR GLOBAL WARMING, THERE ARE SOME UNSEEN ISSUES THAT ARE CAUSED BY HUMAN ACTIVITIES.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
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Finally
In a nutshell
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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260 words

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