The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012
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The graph illustrates quantities of coffee exported from South American countries, namely Brazil, Columbia and
Costa
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Rica
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in the early
2000's
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2000s
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.
Firstly
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, it's easy to notice that between the years 2002 and 2012, Brazil was the leading exporter of the beverage in the region, followed by
Costa
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Rica
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and Columbia. The country has gradually increased its numbers, eventually reaching a high of 25
million
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kilograms
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in 2012. Columbia,
on the other hand
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, experienced a dip in 2008, and its exports fell to an all-time low of three
million
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kilograms
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in 2008.
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, the country bounced back sharply and ended the decade with 15
million
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kilograms
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worth of coffee being sent off-shore.
Costa
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Rica
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,
although
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began the decade with 15
million
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kilograms
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of exports in 2002, the numbers reduced gradually till 2006, and the quantities of beans being shipped abroad declined to 8
million
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kilograms
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. The industry has since bounced back, and presently
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costa
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Costa Rica
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rica
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is the
second highest
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exporter of coffee beans in the region.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words costa, rica, million, kilograms with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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