You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates
variation
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variations
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in the weight of
coffee
exported from Brazil, Colombia, and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012.
Overall
, despite a minor decrease from 2008 to 2010, the
amounth
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amount
amounts
of
coffee
exported from Brazil
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was
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exhibited an upward trend over time. Costa Rica's and Colobia's
value
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followed an unstable trend throughout the period. The weight of
coffee
exported from Brazil was around 12.5
million
kilograms
in 2002, and
then
it slowly increased to 15
million
kilograms
in 2006 before rising more rapidly to 20
million
kilograms
in 2008.
This
amount fell to roughly 16
million
kilograms
after 2 years
,
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and
then
rose
almost
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25
million
kilograms
at the end
of the period. In 2002, the amount of
coffee
exported from Costa Rica was 15
million
kilograms
, and it dropped to about 7.5
million
kilograms
over the next four years before climbing to 20
million
kilograms
over time. Colombia's value was 5
million
kilograms
at the beginning, and it inclined to approximately 12
million
kilograms
in 2006. After a drastic drop of around 10
million
kilograms
over the next two years, it modestly increased to 15
million
kilograms
in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, million, kilograms with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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