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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.
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The graph depicts
levels
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 of various air pollutants in Great Britain over fifteen years, between 1990 to 2015.
Overall
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 air pollutants have declined significantly from 7
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990 to 3
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005. The highest fall in pollutant
levels
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 was noticed in the transport sector, whose numbers reduced from 5
million
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tonnes
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 in 1980 to 3
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005. Industry air pollutants have remained at a steady level since 1990 at one
million
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tonnes
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, with numbers minimally reducing in 2002 Household pollution
levels
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 have shown a noticeable reduction between 1999 to 2005 with
levels
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 falling from 3
million
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 in 1999 to 1
million
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 in 2005.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words levels, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollutants
  • emissions
  • decrease
  • increase
  • stable
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • drop
  • significant
  • legislation
  • technological advancements
  • comparative analysis
  • contributors
  • households
  • transport
  • industry
  • regulation
  • pattern
  • anomaly
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