The diagram below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth

The diagram below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth
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The figure describes the stages in the life of a silkworm and how the
silk
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cloth is produced. The silkworm's journey starts as an egg, and within 10 days it hatches into a larva utilising the mulberry leaves as food. After 4-6 weeks it starts producing
silk
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thread for its protective cocoon, and
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the process is completed in 3-8 days. It takes the silkworm 16 days to metamorphose into a moth and emerge from its cocoon. The production of
silk
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cloth starts with the selection of well-formed cocoons, which are
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boiled in water within specialised chambers. The cocoons disintegrate, unwinding into threads between 300-900nm. These are eventually twisted, weaved and dyed as per choice to beautiful
silk
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cloth.
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  • diagram
  • life cycle
  • silkworm
  • stages
  • production
  • silk cloth
  • overview
  • explanation
  • comparison
  • processes
  • conclusion
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