The graph show the average annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services

The given line graph illustrates the typical

expenditure

every year on

cell

and residential

phone

services

from 2001 to 2010. Units are measured in dollars.

Overall

, it can clearly be seen that the two

services

have different

expenditure

trends.

Meanwhile

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the

cost

of

cell

phone

services

rose,

the

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and the

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residential

phone

services

expenditure

declined throughout the given period. In terms of the service with the highest level of

expenditure

, the

cost

of

cell

phone

services

started at just over $200 in 2001. In the following years, the

cost

soared by $100 and

then

experienced a slight increase to just above $300. From

this

point onwards, the expense witnessed a significant growth to approximately $600 in 2007. The

expenditure

reached a peak of around $750 in 2010. Regarding the

another

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other

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service

expenditure

with lower levels, the residential

phone

services

stood at just under $700 in 2001.

However

, after

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, the

services

fell by roughly $300. In 2006, the

cost

had

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with the

cell

phone

expenditure

at about $550. In 2010, the expense of

this

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these

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services

hit its lowest level at just above $400.