In many countries people use electric devices for daily house chores while some think it is an expensive energy source and we ought to use gas instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.?

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there are a lot of

invention

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design

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designs

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for home appliances. Mostly, countries

are tend

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to

use

electical

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electrical

devices for everyday

task

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tasks

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at home.

While other

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Other

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point of view is still better to

use

gas to conserve energy consumption. Having electrical appliances can make our lives easy,

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and comfort

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comfort

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comfortable

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and save more time.

On the contrary

, electricity bills

more

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are more

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expensive, especially

to

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in

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those areas with high power costs.

For instance

, cleaning the house using

vacuum

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a vacuum

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and scrubber can save time and comfort.

On the other hand

, we can

use

both. For cooking and

heating

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heating,

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we can

use

the

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apply

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gas

while

electricity for

other significant task

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another significant task

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that gives us

conventent

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convenience

.

To conclude

,

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would argue that using

of

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apply

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electrical devices

are

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much way better than gas especially if

your

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you

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leaving

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are living

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alone and working as well.