The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Austrailian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The pie charts illustrate the energy consumption pattern of houses in Australia and the percentage contribution of these to
greenhouse
emissions
.
It is observed that maximum energy is utilised for heating, however
it has a relatively lower contribution to greenhouse
emissions
. On the other hand
, household appliances excluding fridges, light fixtures and cooling, take up to 13% of total energy usage but are responsible for 28% of greenhouse
emissions
.
Water heating is the second biggest reason for electricity consumption in Australia but at 32%, has the highest percentage of greenhouse
emissions
.
Lastly
, refrigerators, lights and cooling devices are collectively responsible for 13 % of all domestic power consumption and makeup
25% of total Correct your spelling
make up
greenhouse
emissions
in Australia.Submitted by surabhichattree on
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