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The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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line
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graph
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 below shows how much
money
Use synonyms
 was spent on
cars
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 in
four
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 different
countries
Use synonyms
 in
Asia
Use synonyms
.
Summarise
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 the
information
Use synonyms
 by selecting and reporting the main
features
Use synonyms
, and make
comparisons
Use synonyms
 where relevant.The
line
Use synonyms
graph
Use synonyms
 below shows how much
money
Use synonyms
 was spent on
cars
Use synonyms
 in
four
Use synonyms
 different
countries
Use synonyms
 in
Asia
Use synonyms
.
Summarise
Use synonyms
 the
information
Use synonyms
 by selecting and reporting the main
features
Use synonyms
, and make
comparisons
Use synonyms
 where relevant.The
line
Use synonyms
graph
Use synonyms
 below shows how much
money
Use synonyms
 was spent on
cars
Use synonyms
 in
four
Use synonyms
 different
countries
Use synonyms
 in
Asia
Use synonyms
.
Summarise
Use synonyms
 the
information
Use synonyms
 by selecting and reporting the main
features
Use synonyms
, and make
comparisons
Use synonyms
 where relevant.The
line
Use synonyms
graph
Use synonyms
 below shows how much
money
Use synonyms
 was spent on
cars
Use synonyms
 in
four
Use synonyms
 different
countries
Use synonyms
 in
Asia
Use synonyms
.
Summarise
Use synonyms
 the
information
Use synonyms
 by selecting and reporting the main
features
Use synonyms
, and make
comparisons
Use synonyms
 where relevant.The
line
Use synonyms
graph
Use synonyms
 below shows how much
money
Use synonyms
 was spent on
cars
Use synonyms
 in
four
Use synonyms
 different
countries
Use synonyms
 in
Asia
Use synonyms
.
Summarise
Use synonyms
 the
information
Use synonyms
 by selecting and reporting the main
features
Use synonyms
, and make
comparisons
Use synonyms
 where relevant.
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Linking words: Add some linking words.
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Linking words: Add linking words.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 92%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, graph, money, cars, four, countries, asia, summarise, information, features, comparisons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "summarise" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparisons" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the seventh paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the ninth paragraph.
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