The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the percentage reports of the driving
test
in one Asian country by women and men over the period from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
it is clear that
the number of Asian women who have passed the
test
is more than the men
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every year.
To begin
, there were almost 50% of female
drivers
who passed the
test
in 1980,
while
it had just below 30% of male
drivers
who achieved the same
test
. After that year, there was a slight increase in the passing rate of women to over 50% from all of them.
Although
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there was a dramatic growth in the amount of male
drivers
who completed the
test
, it didn't reach 40%. Turning to the
last
decades, the percentage of female
drivers
had a drastic rise to the top at almost 70% in 2000 and
then
it dropped marginally to around 65%
at the end
of the period.
Whereas
, the rate of the men who passed the
test
over 10 years from 2000 to 2010 remained unchanged at almost 50%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words test, drivers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Pass rate
  • Driving test
  • Trend
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Milestone
  • Comparison
  • Significant difference
  • Broad social changes
  • Policy changes
  • Surpass
  • Reflect
  • Implications
  • Disparity
  • Overall trends
  • Summarize
  • Statistical data
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