The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts give information about the factors why

people

choose either cycling or driving when they go to work.

Overall

, at first glance, it is evident that

people

select cycling because of its less pollution and health and fitness, and they are accountable for the same share. Interestingly, comfort is the most popular factor that pushes the attraction of drivers. Moving to a more detailed analysis, 12% of individuals think that cycling is better

due to

being faster than driving, compared to

people

who claim driving is safer than cycling is only 11%. The factors of no costs and no parking problems contributed 13% and 15% respectively to total cycling reasons. More than one-third of surveyors prioritise cycling by virtue of less pollution and healthy sides. In terms of driving, carrying things and being faster makes driving more useful for

people

which shows the same contributions, 14%. A bit more than one-fifth of surveyors choose driving for distance to work.

Finally

, the most chosen factor is being convenient for driving and it is responsible for less than half, 40%.

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