The chart below shows the proportion of survey respondents that showed interest in particular sports in three different years in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportion of survey respondents that showed interest in particular sports in three different years in the UK.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart depicts the
percentage
of people who had an interest in specific sports across three different periods of time in the UK,
as a result
of the survey.
Overall
, it can be seen that the ratio of individuals who showed passion
of
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football was more than the
percentage
of others who were fond of the other types of sports.
According to
what is shown, the proportion of individuals who exhibited interest in football was about 42%, in 1995,
then
, it increased gradually in the other two years. But for snooker and golf, there were a similarity, because the proportion of respondents to them was high in 1995, at
bout
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about
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30%,
25
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and 25
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% respectively, which was reduced for both of them in 2000. Following that their ratio rose again in 2005 . Regarding ruby and tennis, there
were
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a fluctuation in the
percentage
of care to them, as the ratio of respondents to ruby was the highest at around 28%, in 2005,
whereas
the
percentage
of folk who preferred tennis was the biggest, in 1995 at about 29%.
To sum up
, we could say that the majority of populations
emerged
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a huge attention to football compared to all other games.
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