he chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
The given column chart illustrates the
amount
of money which was spent on various item groups by different age categories of people
who were living in the UK in 2004. It is clear that
most of
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apply
the
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apply
people
spent
less money on Wrong verb form
spend
restaurant
and Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
hotel
regardless of their ages.
Adults who were under 30 accounted for the least Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
amount
of expenditure on food and drink, and entertainment and shows
almost the same Wrong verb form
showed
amount
for both these categories although
expenditure on restaurant
and Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
hotel
for Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
this
age category had the
dramatic number of almost 15%.
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a
People
between 61 and 75 year
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years
olds
showed Correct your spelling
old
an
opposite trend to adults who were under 30. Correct article usage
the
People
between 61 and 75 constitute the largest amount
of expenditure on entertainment which is approximately 23%. In addition
, this
group spend the least amount
of money on restaurant
and Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
hotel
in Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
compare
to other ages with Replace the word
comparison
the
negligible Correct article usage
a
amount
of under 5%.Submitted by zara.nazarahari on
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