he chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

he chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
The given column chart illustrates the
amount
of money which was spent on various item groups by different age categories of
people
who were living in the UK in 2004.
It is clear that
most
of
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people
spent
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less money on
restaurant
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restaurants
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and
hotel
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hotels
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regardless of their ages. Adults who were under 30 accounted for the least
amount
of expenditure on food and drink, and entertainment and
shows
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almost the same
amount
for both these categories
although
expenditure on
restaurant
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restaurants
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and
hotel
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for
this
age category had
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dramatic number of almost 15%.
People
between 61 and 75
year
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showed
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opposite trend to adults who were under 30.
People
between 61 and 75 constitute the largest
amount
of expenditure on entertainment which is approximately 23%.
In addition
,
this
group spend the least
amount
of money on
restaurant
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restaurants
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and
hotel
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in
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to other ages with
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negligible
amount
of under 5%.
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