The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two diagrams illustrate
a
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apply
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wave-energy machines’ functions and the locations
it
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they
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takes
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take
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place.
Overall
, the process begins with an engine connected to
a
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electricity generator and
also
contains two chambers and a turbine.
Furthermore
, options for location are related to the height of waves. As can be observed, it starts with water levels rising in the first chamber
due to
the wave.
As a result
,
this
leads to
air flow
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airflow
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through the turbine
along with
the
air
coming from the surface of the machine.
Nonetheless
, the
air
leaves the second chamber
to
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outside followed by
air
moving down
to
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the
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below which eventually causes the turbine
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to spins
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spins
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spin
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and generate electricity.
Moreover
, the first choice for the location starts with the one for small waves close to the
sea side
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seaside
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.
Nevertheless
,
this
engine output is lower compared to the other choice.
However
, as the first option installation costs low, the machine for large waves costs a higher amount of money and in return, it generates more power.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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