The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate how the shares of five different items comprising the yearly expenses of a British school changed between 1981 and 2001.
Overall
, academic staff salaries contributed the largest share throughout the survey, Linking Words
whereas
insurance had the smallest. Linking Words
While
they rose Linking Words
along with
furniture and equipment, there were significant declines in the contributions of other workers’ salaries and resources.
Wages paid to the teaching staff accounted for the most significant proportion of expenditure in 1981 (40%) and went up by a quarter in 1991 before declining slightly to 45% in 2001. In comparison, the salaries of non-academic employees were responsible for 28% of all expenses in 1981, but their share gradually dropped to 15% over the course of these 20 years.
The share of furniture and equipment was Linking Words
initially
as high as that of educational resources (15%), but Linking Words
while
the former dropped by 2/3 before rising almost fivefold to 23%, the latter experienced a marked rise, after which it halved, reaching just below 10%.
The contribution of insurance remained almost stable at 2-3% during the first 10 years, but it had
increased almost threefold by 2001.Linking Words
Submitted by writingbhos on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
▼