Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem
Dear Mr./Madam
I am writing to concern with my problem. It was
last
week when I returned from my business trip from Moscow to Erevan . It was the number 124 plane at evening 11:45 PM When I went out of the airport I realized that i
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I
forgot
my Verb problem
had left
bag
on my plane.
I would like to describe my bag
it is a plack , smoll
size Correct your spelling
small
bag
, on its two sides are the red lines, It has metallic zip . That beg for my more important because it gave me my friend for my birthday and it was for me more expensive
. Correct word choice
apply
In addition
, there a different kinds of documents in my bag
.
I would like to do everything to find my bag
and return it to me. If you can not find it I will write my insurance and I will open clame
. I think when you one more time investigate Correct your spelling
flame
this
process you will find my bag
.
I want to inform you that I will wait
you Add the preposition
wait for
just
five days and Change preposition
for just
then
I will write my insurance for of clame
.
I am looking forward to hearing your answer.
Yours faithfully
Zohrab GevorgyanCorrect your spelling
claim
Submitted by zohrab-gevorgyan on
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Greeting
Ensure the greeting matches the formality of the letter. 'Dear Mr./Madam' could be more accurately phrased as 'Dear Sir/Madam' to adhere to conventional formats.
Structure
For a stronger structure, organize your letter into clear paragraphs: Introduction, description of the bag, actions you desire, and a conclusion.
Vocabulary
Avoid spelling errors and use more precise vocabulary. For instance, 'plack , smoll size bag' should be 'black, small-sized bag'. Keeping vocabulary precise and correct improves clarity and professionalism.
Tone and Politeness
Consider using polite requests and offering specific solutions rather than stating what you will do if the bag is not found. This maintains a respectful and cooperative tone.
Cohesion
Improve coherence by connecting your ideas more smoothly. Use linking words effectively to ensure a clear flow between points.