The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given charts compare the
population
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of
Yemen
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and Italy in 2000 based on three age categories, namely
children
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aged 0-14
years
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,
adults
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aged 15-59
years
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old, and elderly aged 60+
years
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,
along with
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the prediction of
population
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growth in 2050.
Overall
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, in 2000, the highest
population
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in
Yemen
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was
children
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and in Italy was
adolescence
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to
adults
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. Meanwhile, it is given that
adults
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will be the largest
number
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in both countries in 2050.
To begin
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with, both countries had a totally different
population
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at the beginning of the period. In 2000, the
number
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of
children
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under 15
years
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old was more than half of
Yemen
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's
population
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.
In contrast
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, the same category was nearly 14% of Italy's
population
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. In the next category, there were approximately 46% of
Yemen
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's
population
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was in the adult phase
while
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almost a third of Italy's
population
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was
adults
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.
Finally
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, the elderly were the least
number
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of
Yemen
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's
population
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with only 3.6%
whereas
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there were 8 times
this
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number
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in Italy. In terms of the projections for 2050, both countries are targeting
adults
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as the highest
population
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. For
children
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, it is predicted to decline to 37% in
Yemen
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and to 11.5% in Italy.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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of elderly will grow almost twice it was in 2000 in each country.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, yemen, children, years, adults, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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