Some people think that robots are important for human future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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coherence cohesion
Use a clear and structured format for your essay, with distinct paragraphs for introduction, each view, and a conclusion to improve logical structure.
coherence cohesion
Include a clear introductory paragraph that outlines the essay topic and your thesis statement. Also, ensure to conclude your essay with a summary of discussed points and your definitive opinion to enhance your score on introduction and conclusion presence.
coherence cohesion
Provide consistent support for your main points through the use of specific examples and explanations. This deepens the reader's understanding and connection to your argument, boosting the score for supported main points.
task achievement
Address the essay question fully by discussing both views presented in the prompt before stating your own opinion. This ensures a complete response to the task.
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Clarify and develop your ideas further to provide a comprehensive understanding of each point. Avoid overgeneralizations to make your argument more compelling.
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Incorporate relevant and specific examples to support your arguments. This could be through citing real-world applications of robots, their impact on industries, and how they affect society to enhance the relevance and specificity of examples.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
In this era of modern technology, remote work can be as effective and productive as office work. We, as a humanity, have already proven this during the COVID-19 pandemic, when the world suddenly stopped its activities and started to find new ways to adapt to these sudden changes. That includes the way that we work. This new method of work, called remote work, allows workers to have more to spend with their families and save more money since they do not need to pay anything to commute or lunch. It will also provide workers with the ability to choose the most comfortable workplace, thus bringing more happiness to the workers. Unfortunately, these positive ideas of remote work are sometimes not as good as they should be once it is applied. There have been many cases where remote work causes families to separate instead since not all workers can manage their time well, thus affecting their time with their families. Sometimes, the workplace could also be the cause of it because they ass...
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It is stated that the primary objective of science ought to be to enhance ordinary people’s lives. To the future survival of mankind, science has a great contribution and I completely agree with the given statement.
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