Some people think that robots are important for human future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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coherence cohesion
Use a clear and structured format for your essay, with distinct paragraphs for introduction, each view, and a conclusion to improve logical structure.
coherence cohesion
Include a clear introductory paragraph that outlines the essay topic and your thesis statement. Also, ensure to conclude your essay with a summary of discussed points and your definitive opinion to enhance your score on introduction and conclusion presence.
coherence cohesion
Provide consistent support for your main points through the use of specific examples and explanations. This deepens the reader's understanding and connection to your argument, boosting the score for supported main points.
task achievement
Address the essay question fully by discussing both views presented in the prompt before stating your own opinion. This ensures a complete response to the task.
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Clarify and develop your ideas further to provide a comprehensive understanding of each point. Avoid overgeneralizations to make your argument more compelling.
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Incorporate relevant and specific examples to support your arguments. This could be through citing real-world applications of robots, their impact on industries, and how they affect society to enhance the relevance and specificity of examples.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
Currently, in the world, there are so many students whose talents are incredible but are hindered just by their state. Rural affects a lot of people, and to solve this problem, I have come up with some solutions.
The importance of first impressions in professional settings cannot be overstated, particularly when seeking employment opportunities. Many believe that excelling in job interviews is the key to landing a suitable job. I agree with this view and in the following paragrapahs I will explain why.
I hope this letter finds you well. I recently received your letter and understood that you are confused about whether to go to college or enter the job market. And I had thought about it , therefore I wanted to share my advice . I believe getting a job might be the best choice for you right now and I would explain why.
In today's world, there is a heavy debate about all human beings are born equal and hence every male and female are capable of doing the same work, while others disagree with this statement saying there are some areas in which female genders cannot work. This is because of the strength difference in the body and the nature of the job they work in.
Nowadays, a number of people prefer to spend their lives close to their home town, rather than moving somewhere. There is one main reason for that, which is not going out of your comfort zone. Firstly, action like leaving your comfort zone is hard to do physically, as well as mentally. For instance, the enormous number of individuals, do not want to leave their familiar places, in light of the fact that of fear. It leads to uncompleted dreams and achievements, such as studying at a top-notch university or applying for a well-paid job in another country or city. Also, it can happen, owing to a lack of resources or opportunities elsewhere, as well as financial constraints. This can cause an unsatisfied feeling during your whole life, and it is going to be only, due to lack of strength. Furthermore, you not only need to be brave, but educated abundance and have great skills for moving abroad. Secondly, a sense of belonging will not exist for you for an extremely long period, it may eve...