The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984. Write no less than 150 words.
These two charts show us the difference between the age match of the populations of France and India in 1984.
In the first chart, we are going to compare the amount of
females
and males
average age in France. First of all, we can see that approximately there between 3.5 percent and 4% of the same amount of males
and females
who are in to same brackets between 5-10 , 0-5, 30-35, 40-45, etc. However
, for 85 years old or older, there are more females
than males
.
In the second chart, we are seeing the same idea but coming from India. The chart shows 7 per cent (the maximum) of males
and females
going from 0 to 5 years old. And It is all equal on both sides for each age gap.
To conclude
, we can see that in 1984 , India had a bigger population because of the number of males
and females
but there were equals on average. There is approximately the same number of males
as females
coming from 0 to 85+ years old. But in France, the population is way smaller with an imbalance of males
and females
. There are more females
than males
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