The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.
The line graph shows
about
information regarding the Change preposition
apply
number
of people that graduated from university
in Canada since
1992 to 2007. Change preposition
from
Overall
, it can be seen that both female
and Fix the agreement mistake
females
male
have similar Fix the agreement mistake
males
pattern
until the end of Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
period
.
Add an article
the period
To begin
with, males began with 70.000 individuals that
passed their education in the Correct pronoun usage
who
university
. Then
, it was followed by a fluctuation from 1994 to 2000. However
, number
of male graduates Change the article
a number
the number
standed
Correct your spelling
stood
from
70.000 to 80.000 for 7 years. Change preposition
at
Next,
in 2002, there is
a dramatic increase in the Wrong verb form
was
number
of males that graduated from university
. In addition
, male graduates reached the highest at over 90.000 people.
Whereas
, women graduates stand at 100.000 people. Next. there is
a gradual gain in Wrong verb form
was
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
female
that passed their education Change to a plural noun
females
in
Change preposition
at
university
in 1994. Add an article
a university
However
, the number
of gradutes
significantly declined during 4 years. Correct your spelling
graduates
Then
, there is
a dramatic gain in Wrong verb form
was
number
of female that Change the article
a number
the number
compeleted
their education in Correct your spelling
completed
university
until the end of period
. Add an article
the period
Additionally
, the number
of female graduated
attained its peak of highest Wrong verb form
graduates
number
namely over 140.000 in 2006.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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