Parents are the best teachers .do you agree or disagree

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Father and Mother are the role models for their
children
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. There is no doubt that their kids are being affected by their
behavior
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behaviour
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at
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in
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all situations of
life
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.so, I strongly agree with
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view, because
children
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will do what
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parents
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their parents
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do exactly, think the way their
parents
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think and
parents
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are the window of their
children
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to the big world. It is worth considering that
Children
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mimic their
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parents
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parent's
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behavior and attitudes. Sometimes they copycat them whether
if
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this
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behavior is bad or good, acceptable or not.
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when the father says a very bad word in front of his child
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he should not be surprised when he hears that child say the same word in another situation. When
this
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kid becomes a
grown up
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,he will use the same words you always say.
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hand
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when your
tounge
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tongue
is always clean and says beautiful, complimentary talk , your
children
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will be the same . So try to make an effort and watch your language and improve your
attitudes
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. What is
more
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more,
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is that
parents
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are the way
to
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for
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their
children
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to see and adapt to the new big world.
Children
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build their information and concepts about people and everything in
life
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from their father and mother because
children
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trust
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parents
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their parents
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a lot .
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example
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if you are always optimistic, thankful and hopeful in
life
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they will be that too.
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hand
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if you are pessimistic and
biliousness
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bilious
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,
children
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will be the same and will not succeed at anything in their
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.
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but not
the
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least they see the world
by
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through
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your eyes, so try to make it good for them. To draw the conclusion,
Children
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are the mirror of their
parents
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. In my point of
view
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view,
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if
parents
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want to see their
children
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something
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amazing in the future ,they must start with themselves.
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