The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.
The line graph clarifies the proportion of men and women who they have completed their university studies in Canada between 1992_2007.
Overall
, the number
of graduates increased gradually over time, we notice from the table a huge amount of students
finished their studies in 2006 compared to the minimum number
of students
in 1992.
Firstly
, when we take a look at the table, we found in 1992 about 70000 male students
had completed their studies in academic and these figures dropped to 98000 in 2006 . Whereas
, approximately 100000 female students
had graduated from Canadian universities in 1998 and these numbers picked up to 150000 in 2006. However
, we notice from the chart a lot of girls received education in contrast
to boys. In addition
, more women were educated from 1998-2006 , although
a lot of men received an education in 2006 compared to 1998 but still the number
of females doubled the number
of males in the field of study.Submitted by mohammedelhassan811 on
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