The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
This
line graph provides the rate of individuals unemployed in Australia per quarter
of the year in 2012. Overall
, it is clear that
the highest rate of unemployment was in Rural places in the first period, while
Urban areas
were the lowest.
It is interesting to notice that in the first quarter
, Urban areas
had approximately 2.5 unemployment, Whereas
in Rural places was around 6.5 per cent
. The proportion of unemployment increased slightly in the first quarter
. After that, there is a significant fall in the second quarter
of the year. Moreover
, Rural areas
had an increase in the same period. For example
, it was almost 4.5 per cent
, then
increased to nearly 5.5 per cent
in the following year. In addition
, there was a considerable rise in the Uban areas
it was around 2 per cent
, then
became 4 per cent
in the same period.
In conclusion, the lowest rate was in Urban areas
, but Rural places were the highest.Submitted by kazza735 on
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