The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of engergy in the US in 1980 with projections until 2030

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of engergy in the US in 1980 with projections until 2030
The line graph illustrates 2008 data about the U.S
energy
consumption
by fuel from 1980 to projections until 2030.
Overall
,
it is clear that
petrol and oil have been the primary source of
energy
throughout the periods
while
nuclear, solar/wind
,
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and hydropower have been less consumed. In 1980, petrol and oil
was
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the highest
source
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of
energy
, around 35
quadrillions
of
units
were consumed by Americans.
However
, it is expected that the figure will be increased significantly by 2030, and the usage will be around 45
quadrillions
units
.
Furthermore
, in the past, the
consumption
of natural gas was higher than coal, but Future predictions suggest a reversal, with coal usage expected to surpass natural gas
consumption
with slight fluctuations.
In contrast
, The usage of nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower is relatively less than other mentioned resources.
Although
in 1980, all three
energy
sources
was
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utilised around 3 quadrillion
units
, Future projections anticipate a shift. The
consumption
of nuclear
energy
is expected to
increased
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slight
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and approximately 5
quadrillions
units
respectively.
Moreover
, Solar/wind and hydropower are expected to grow approximately 2 and 3
quadrillions
units
respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, consumption, quadrillions, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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