The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of engergy in the US in 1980 with projections until 2030
The line graph illustrates 2008 data about the U.S
energy
consumption
by fuel from 1980 to projections until 2030.
Overall
, it is clear that
petrol and oil have been the primary source of energy
throughout the periods while
nuclear, solar/wind,
and hydropower have been less consumed.
In 1980, petrol and oil Remove the comma
apply
was
the highest Correct subject-verb agreement
were
source
of Fix the agreement mistake
sources
energy
, around 35 quadrillions
of units
were consumed by Americans. However
, it is expected that the figure will be increased significantly by 2030, and the usage will be around 45 quadrillions
units
. Furthermore
, in the past, the consumption
of natural gas was higher than coal, but Future predictions suggest a reversal, with coal usage expected to surpass natural gas consumption
with slight fluctuations.
In contrast
, The usage of nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower is relatively less than other mentioned resources. Although
in 1980, all three energy
sources was
utilised around 3 quadrillion Change the verb form
were
units
, Future projections anticipate a shift. The consumption
of nuclear energy
is expected to increased
Change the verb
increase
slight
and approximately 5 Change the word
slightly
quadrillions
units
respectively. Moreover
, Solar/wind and hydropower are expected to grow approximately 2 and 3 quadrillions
units
respectively.Submitted by sadiahussain028 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, consumption, quadrillions, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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