You are spent a night in a hotel and had to put up with a great deal of noise very early in the morning because of a fairly central heating system. The manager promised contact you regarding compensation but you still heard from him. Write a letter to the hotel in the letter. Describe the problem at the hotel. Explain what the manager had said at the time. Say what you wanted the manager to do
Dear Sir ,
The reason why I am addressing to explain some problems with
Correct article usage
the heating
heating
system in the Correct article usage
the heating
hotel
that make
Verb problem
had
Change the word
badly
bad
Replace the word
badly
effect
Correct your spelling
affected
Change preposition
on my
my
health during Change preposition
on my
Correct pronoun usage
my stay
stay
so I wanted Correct pronoun usage
my stay
Fix the infinitive
to pay
pay
compensation from your Fix the infinitive
to pay
hotel
Change preposition
for this
this
situation. Change preposition
for this
Last
week I visited your city for my work and my work maintaining long
time Change the article
a long
as a result
I had to stay hotel
.Then
I ask help
from Change preposition
for help
residents
Change noun form
residents'
resident's
accommation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
for
stay Change preposition
apply
this
city they recommend your Change preposition
in this
hotel
best place and Change noun form
hotel's
exellent
service . Correct your spelling
excellent
However
, I am not satisfying
Wrong verb form
satisfied
from
your service because I faced Change preposition
with
trouble
situation.To explain, thereCorrect article usage
a trouble
fault
central heating systemReplace the word
faulty
negative
Change the word
negatively
effect
my healthCorrect your spelling
affected
that
.Correct pronoun usage
apply
As a
result
I have Add a comma
result,
headache
and Add an article
a headache
high
temperature Correct article usage
a high
aslo
I had to Correct your spelling
also
called
Change the verb
call
amblunace
that moment.
Correct your spelling
ambulance
ambience
That is
, that night I feel
very bad condition. Wrong verb form
felt
Also
that time youAdd a comma
Also,
promise
me Wrong verb form
promised
tackled
Wrong verb form
tackle
this
matter. But I am
not still heard Verb problem
have
you
news. So I demand you reliable solution.
I regard as you Change the pronoun
your
responsible
person for Correct article usage
a responsible
this
issue and you need
resolve Add the particle
need to
this
problem.I wanted you help
me tackle it soon.
I hope you understand my situation and take into account my request.
Add the particle
to help
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
Mahliyo AzimovaCorrect your spelling
Yours
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Address all parts of the task more completely: describe the problem in more detail, clearly explain what the manager had said, and specify what compensation or action you seek.
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