You are spent a night in a hotel and had to put up with a great deal of noise very early in the morning because of a fairly central heating system. The manager promised contact you regarding compensation but you still heard from him. Write a letter to the hotel in the letter. Describe the problem at the hotel. Explain what the manager had said at the time. Say what you wanted the manager to do

#night #hotel #noise #system #manager #contact #compensation #time

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Sir , The reason why I am addressing to explain some problems with

Correct article usage

the heating

show examples

heating

Correct article usage

the heating

show examples

system in the

hotel

that

make

Verb problem

had

show examples

Change the word

badly

show examples

bad

Replace the word

badly

show examples

effect

Correct your spelling

affected

show examples

Change preposition

on my

show examples

Change preposition

on my

show examples

health during

Correct pronoun usage

my stay

show examples

stay

Correct pronoun usage

my stay

show examples

so I wanted

Fix the infinitive

to pay

show examples

pay

Fix the infinitive

to pay

show examples

compensation from your

hotel

Change preposition

for this

show examples

this

Change preposition

for this

show examples

situation.

Last

week I visited your city for my work and my work maintaining

long

Change the article

a long

show examples

time

as a result

I had to stay

hotel

Then

I ask

help

Change preposition

for help

show examples

from

residents

Change noun form

residents'

resident's

show examples

accommation

Correct your spelling

accommodation

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

stay

this

Change preposition

in this

show examples

city they recommend your

hotel

Change noun form

hotel's

show examples

best place and

exellent

Correct your spelling

excellent

service .

However

, I am not

satisfying

Wrong verb form

satisfied

show examples

from

Change preposition

with

show examples

your service because I faced

trouble

Correct article usage

a trouble

show examples

situation.To explain, there

fault

Replace the word

faulty

show examples

central heating system

negative

Change the word

negatively

show examples

effect

Correct your spelling

affected

show examples

my health

that

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

As a

result

Add a comma

result,

show examples

I have

headache

Add an article

a headache

show examples

and

high

Correct article usage

a high

show examples

temperature

aslo

Correct your spelling

also

I had to

called

Change the verb

call

show examples

amblunace

Correct your spelling

ambulance

ambience

that moment.

That is

, that night I

feel

Wrong verb form

felt

show examples

very bad condition.

Also

Add a comma

Also,

show examples

that time you

promise

Wrong verb form

promised

show examples

tackled

Wrong verb form

tackle

show examples

this

matter. But I

Verb problem

have

show examples

not still heard

you

Change the pronoun

your

show examples

news. So I demand you reliable solution. I regard as you

responsible

Correct article usage

a responsible

show examples

person for

this

issue and you

need

Add the particle

need to

show examples

resolve

this

problem.I wanted you

help

Add the particle

to help

show examples

me tackle it soon. I hope you understand my situation and take into account my request.

Correct the word

Yours

show examples

Your

Correct your spelling

Yours

show examples

faithfully, Mahliyo Azimova

Submitted by soglomovsarvar on Tue Feb 27 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure clear paragraphing with a distinct opening, body paragraphs, and closing. Each paragraph should have a clear central idea.

Coherence and Cohesion

Utilize varied sentence structures and transitions to improve the flow of ideas.

Task Achievement

Address all parts of the task more completely: describe the problem in more detail, clearly explain what the manager had said, and specify what compensation or action you seek.

Task Achievement

Employ a consistently polite and formal tone suitable for a letter of complaint.

General Writing Skills

Check for grammar mistakes and typos to improve the clarity and professionalism of the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
46
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

8
band
Since traveling abroad has become relatively inexpensive more countries are opening their doors for foreign tourists. Is it a positive or negative trend? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
In the post-pandemic age, various governments are weighing the pros and cons of reopening their doors to international tourists. From my perspective, this, on the one hand, will pose significant challenges to governments' ability to manage domestic affairs; on the other hand, flourishing tourism can to some extent slow down the trend of de-globalisation.
4.5
band
Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: your reason for writing what you would like to happen a nice, respectful style
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your dog that barks throughout the day and distracts me every day.
4.5
band
Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars
With the advent of technology, the world is evolving faster with several technological advancements making our lives easier. Over the past three decades, car ownership has seen an unprecedented rise, leading to severe congestion on the roads. I think the above statement is very true. The government should take necessary measures to discourage people from using cars.
6
band
Some parents think children should have mobile phones , others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is true that in this day and age, opinion is divided over whether parents ought to provide an electrical device or not. In this essay, I will look at both sides of this debate as well as offer my own point of view.
6.5
band
Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
It is more common that taxis and buses are the only means of transportation in some areas. I believe that this is a positive development for the growing benefits of protecting the environment for societies while there are potential negative effects on individuals who are troubled by the inconvenience.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Since traveling abroad has become relatively inexpensive more countries are opening their doors for foreign tourists. Is it a positive or negative trend? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: your reason for writing what you would like to happen a nice, respectful style

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars

Some parents think children should have mobile phones , others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.