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you are taking a course at a local cellege. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven't finished it. • introduce yourself • explain why you haven't handed in the project yet • request more time to do ot

#course #cellege #deadline #project #week #haven #request #time #ot
Dear Bob, Hope you are well. The reason why I am writing
this
 letter is missed a
project
 deadline and will avoid
this
 situation in the future. I am Jasmina
which
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I
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 am taking a course at a local
cellege
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college
.I will ask apologize from you. I know that
this
project
 is very significant to your company. I will meet with you which will talk about
project
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the project
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. I hope that you are not unhappy. A few days ago, my sister was birthday. I did
works
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work
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 at home for
birthday
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my birthday
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 and I missed a
project
 deadline. I think you
are understood
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understand
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 my condition. I believe that I will finish
this
project
 soon, and today, I work
in
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on
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this
project
 all day. I heard that
this
 condition resulted in your company losing an important client. I will try to solve
this
 problem. I promise to finish
project
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the project
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 soon. Youth sincerely, Jasmina Khudoyberdiyeva
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introduction
Make sure your introduction sets a clear context for the reader and directly addresses the task's requirements. Clearly state the purpose of your letter.
coherence cohesion
Organize your essay more logically. Each paragraph should have a clear main idea and progress smoothly to the next. Using linking words effectively can help with this.
task achievement
Provide specific examples to support your reasons. Instead of merely stating you missed the deadline due to a family event, explain how the event required your participation and impacted your ability to complete the project.
conclusion
Ensure your conclusion effectively summarizes your points and includes a clear request or statement about what you hope will happen next.
accuracy
Pay attention to spelling and grammar. Errors can detract from the clarity of your message. For instance, 'cellege' should be 'college', and 'Youth sincerely' should be 'Yours sincerely'.
vocabulary
Use more specific vocabulary to accurately express your ideas. Instead of saying 'I did works at home for birthday', say 'I was busy preparing for my sister's birthday celebration, which took up most of my time.'

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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