The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.
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The picture gives the sequence of the recycling of
glass
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into 5 steps with notes.
The first step is
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to put the
bottle
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into a recycle bin. The
glass
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should be put into a specific bin.
Therefore
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, the garbage truck could recognize which of the stuff needs to
collect
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be collected
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to the treatment plant. After all the
glass
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is collected, the third step is to clean all the material, putting the
glass
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into the washing and sterilising machine. Before
remodeling
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remodelling
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the
glass
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, the
bottle
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of
glass
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model to different shapes is low effectively.
Thus
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,
the
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in the
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fourth step, the
bottle
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needs to be broken down into small pieces and
to
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apply
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put
in
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at
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a high temperature to melt it to become liquid,an easy way to use liquid.
Last
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but not least, putting the liquid into the model of product shape. Once the shape cools down, the
glass
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bottle
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will be reused to become a product and
deliver
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delivered
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it
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apply
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to the supermarket.
Then
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the
glass
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would be into a circle of
recycle
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recycling
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, bottle with synonyms.
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