In some places old age is valued, while other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, a number of areas where older humans have a significant role than youngsters .

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, other

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claim that the young citizens are more vital.

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believe

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that

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orphan

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are the main sources of work which

develop

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countries in every

fields

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. First of all, the

adolescents

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generation

have

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a wide knowledge in each domain of life. In recent years, young people have invented many devices and tools which are contributing to the higher quality of

citizens'life

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citizens life

citizens live

and supporting

for

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keeping the pace of technological advancements and global change.

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China as an example,

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life in their country has grown

futher

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further

than many ones, with the

using

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of automatic

equiptments

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equipment

applied everywhere.

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, the youth

are

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also

be flexible in

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works

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, they have a nice brain which

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elder

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never gain.

On the other hand

, older people play an effective role in some areas. Because of having

longer

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time of living,

elder

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generation

seen to gain more experience than the younger one. Respect for the elderly

is

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work

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in many societies, leading to practices

such

as sharing advice from older family members

important

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decisions. In an extended family, every crucial conclusion had agreed by older person before did it. From

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writer'experience

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experience

, both

generation

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also

play a vital role in societies but younger

are

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better than the older

one

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.

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is because they have an effective mental power than the older

generation

. A

person

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example is younger become scientists is higher than ever. The latter needs help with

problem-soving

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problem-solving

skills and communicating effectively

in

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work. Taking everything into consideration,

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essay has shown the main factors which younger are more significant than older

one

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.

Therefore

, youngsters are the

generation

which

develop

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country

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.