The diagram below shows the process of using water to generate electricity for human use.

The diagram below shows the process of using water to generate electricity for human use.
The illustration delineates the process of Hydroelectric power generation via seawater usage for several public facilities in the seashore areas. In an
overall
analysis, the process diagram offers insights into the application of natural resources and processes in order to create electricity that comprises three main cycles (collection, energy generation and distribution). Examining the first cycle, it can be observed that
firstly
sea water is evaporated by the sun's heat and transformed into a storm cloud.
Next,
the formed cloud releases the precipitation onto an artificial reservoir that gathers rainwater. After that, the opening of the valve on the dam powers the turbine by water currents. At
this
stage of energy production, water flows into a pump from the turbine sector that transfers it back to the reservoir creating a repeated cycle. Afterwards, energy generated by the turbine is sent to the transformer station via high voltage cables. In the
last
stage, underground cables distribute the electricity to essential public facilities
such
as hospitals, schools and factories.
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