The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2000 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar charts illustrate data on the proportion of movies produced compared to cinema ticket revenue in a country from 1996 to 2000. In general, the number of movies released in 1996 was significantly lower than in 2000. Notably, ticket sales for films in the drama and comedy genres constituted a higher percentage compared to those in fantasy and

romance

. In terms of movie genres produced, dramas took the lead with 27%, followed by comedies at 20%, fantasies at 16%, and

romance

at the lowest with 5% in 1996. By 2000, there was stable development in premiered films across four genres, except for

Romance

, which experienced a decline. In 1996, Comedy claimed the top spot, accounting for the highest percentage of sales at 20%,

while

fantasy was the least

favored

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, earning a modest 3%. In 2000, there was an

overall

growth in the percentage of tickets sold, with the

romance

genre being the only exception, suffering a 3% decline compared to 1996.

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