The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates how the time UK unemployed was spent,
last
year. There are several activities in the rows and in the columns are shown periods in the day like morning and afternoon
, grouped by gender.
Overall
, most men spent their time looking for a job (22%) in the morning and watching TV (14%) in the afternoon
. For women, the majority spent the day with housework, whether in the morning (49%) or in the afternoon
(21%).
The 3 most popular activities for both sexes, in the morning, are job hunting, shopping, and housework. There are some changes in the afternoon
. On one hand, men preferred watching TV, gardening, and looking for employment. On the other hand
, women preferred visiting friends or relatives, searching for ajob
, and doing housework.
Some tasks like playing sports and staying in bed were reported only by men in both periods. Women reported these activities just in the morning.Correct your spelling
a job
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words afternoon with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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