The graph shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.

The graph shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
The line graph gives detailed information about the alterations in food ingestion in China during a 25-year period starting from 1985.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that the
consumption
of
meat
and fish increased slightly over the period
while
eating
salt
declined.
Then
,
meat
and
salt
were met at the same figure by 2010. Looking at the illustration more in detail, it is evident that fish
consumption
was settled at the highest than other foods by a
number
of 600
grams
in 1985. In the following years the trend fluctuated, it started to rise in the next 5 years to 700
grams
but
then
dropped by a
number
of 600
grams
in 1995.
However
, the
consumption
of fish has grown to nearly 850, which was the highest amount in 2014.
Meat
and
salt
had a different start in 1985.
Salt
consumption
started at almost a
number
of 500
grams
,
while
it decreased by 300
grams
in 2010 became 200
grams
. The
consumption
of
meat
gradually went up by 100
grams
and finished with the same
number
of salts at 200
grams
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, meat, salt, number, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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