The pie charts below shows the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years.

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between

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and 25 age group

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to watch

TV

in Canada in 2009 and 2019.

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, what we can see in the graph is that, At the beginning of the period, conversational

TV

was the biggest segment,

while

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screen

TV

were the smallest portions. In comparison,

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of the interval, Conversational Television became the smallest section, during the time that

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Flat screen

TV

emerged as the dominant medium. At the beginning of the time Traditional

TV

produced 34% and

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decrease to 4% in 2019.

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, Tablet and Flat screen

TV

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were the smallest parts with 5% and 8%.

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the other hand, Tablet was 19%,

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television with a flat displayed 27%.

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, it became the biggest section

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the final year,

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mobile

phone

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rose by 11%, from 15% to 26%.

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,the proportion of

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decreased marginally by 12% and became the second lowest part.