IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed at a hotel and you had a great time. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter thank the manager and his staff give some particular examples of why you enjoyed your stay at the hotel so much explain that you have written a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about the great time had during my stay in your
hotel
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,I spent around 3 days in your
hotel
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last
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 week because we had a special meeting with all the branch managers of my company in your
hotel
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. I would like to express my sincere gratitude to the
hotel
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 manager and staff who provided excellent customer
service
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 from the beginning to the end of the meeting. We had 03 workshops for our branch managers during the period and were able to complete all those on time without any delays since the staff of the
hotel
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 provided an incredibly friendly
service
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 for us.
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hall
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 arrangement was well executed by the employees as we did not feel any
uncomfort
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discomfort
. As I am impressed with the
service
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 and all of our participants were well praised about your
service
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 , I have written a review for your place
in
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on
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 trip advisor.com web page. Thank you once again. Yours Sincerely Aravinda

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coherence cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, try to ensure that each paragraph smoothly transitions to the next. Using linking phrases could help improve the flow.
coherence cohesion
Ensure complete ideas in each paragraph to impart clarity and structure. For instance, elaborating more on what specific services stood out would be beneficial.
task achievement
Your tone is polite and appreciative, which is very suitable for this kind of letter.
task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the prompt well, including thanking the manager and staff, providing specific examples, and mentioning your review.
coherence cohesion
Good organization of ideas into coherent paragraphs, with a clear beginning, middle, and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Closing and greetings are well-executed, adding a courteous touch.
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