The bar chart below shows the employment of all male and female workers by occupation in UK in the year 2005 Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides data about the
proportion
of all men and women employees at nine job positions in United
Kingdom in the year 2005.
It can be seen that the employment trends of all men and women were completely different, Correct article usage
the United
while
the proportion
of men at
skilled trades was highest, the Change preposition
in
proportion
of women was lowest.
Speaking of male workers, they had trend
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a trend
at
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in
such
as skilled trades, managers and senior officials, professional, associate professional and technical (accounded
for about 20 Correct your spelling
accounted
percent
, 18 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, 14 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
and 13 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
respectively). Change the spelling
per cent
By contrast
, other fields accounded
low Correct your spelling
accounted
proportion
, specifically, process, plant and machine operatives and elementary were about 12 percent
, sale and customer Change the spelling
per cent
service
and administrative and secretarial were about 5 percent
, personal Change the spelling
per cent
service
was about 2 percent
.
As regards female workers, they had Change the spelling
per cent
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a trend
at
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service
and sale
and customer Fix the agreement mistake
sales
service
(accounded
for about 22%, 15%, 14% and 13% respectively. Correct your spelling
accounted
In addition
, managers and senior officials, professional and elementary were just about 12%. And the
jobs Correct word choice
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had
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that had
lowest
percentage were skilled trades and process, plant and machine operatives (just about 2%).Correct article usage
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