the chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart provides an overview of a survey that
encompass
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the
people
’s preferences and
consumptions
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consumption
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of
coffee
and tea in five distinct areas of
australia
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Australia
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. Generally speaking, in five distinct areas almost half of
people
bought
coffee
or tea when they had gone to a cafe. The most number of
people
went
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who went
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to
cafe
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the cafe
a cafe
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is
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belonged to Melbourne. Following
the
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Melbourne,
hobart
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Hobart
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comes with almost in some proportion. The consumption of fresh
coffee
experienced a proportion below 45
percent
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per cent
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in all cities. The majority of
people
preferedinstant
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preferred instant
caffee
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coffee
rather than the fresh ones. In
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Brisbane
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brisbane
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brisbane,
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whereas
approximately 52
percent
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per cent
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of
people
opted to drink instant
caffee
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coffee
, less than 35
percent
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per cent
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of
people
choosed
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chose
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the
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instant ones.
To sum up
,
people
’s prominent option among beverages is
coffee
during the
last
four
week
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weeks
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.
While
ratio of
the
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apply
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fresh
caffee
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coffee
consumption
below
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is below
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the
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apply
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40
percent
in three cities
that
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apply
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encompassing
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including
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hobart
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Hobart
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, adeliaide,
brisbane
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and brisbane
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, in other
who
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apply
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cities proportion of fresh
coffee
consumption
above
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is above
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the
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apply
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40
percent
.
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