3. The pie charts show the results of a survey in which undergraduates and postgraduates were asked about the range of books and non-printed materials in their school library. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts below present data from a survey conducted in a
school
, reflecting the responses of both undergraduate and graduate students
regarding the diversity of books and information-providing devices in the library
. Overall
, it is evident that undergraduate scholars tend to express positive satisfaction with the school
's facilities, while
graduate students
exhibit dissatisfaction with their educational resources.
Firstly
, 22% of graduates report being completely satisfied with the variety of books available in the school
library
. In contrast
, more than double that number, specifically 50% of students
, feel that the library
lacks diversity in its book collection. Furthermore
, the school
's inadequate facilities lead to 62% of alumni giving a negative assessment of this
issue, while
only 16% of students
express contentment.
Regarding book diversity, more than one-third of the total student population at the school
, accounting for 37% and 35% respectively, indicate appreciation and enjoyment with
the Change preposition
of
library
's book selection. Moreover
, the majority of students
, at
68%, trust the academic materials provided by the university. Change preposition
apply
However
, 12% of current students
still have higher requirements for these resources.Submitted by lmnhi113 on
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