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You are talking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you have not finished it write a letter to your lecturer in your letter. Introduce yourself Explain why you have not handed in the project yet. Request more time to do it.

#course #college #deadline #project #week #lecturer #request #time
Dear Sir or Madam, The reason why I am writing
this
 letter is that I want
that
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apply
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you should give
more
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me more
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 time to do my project as I have not finished it
according to
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for
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 some
reasons
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reason
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. I believe that my letter will be accepted as soon as possible. I am Anna Steve
as well
as
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and
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 I am
director
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the director
a director
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 of
secondary
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a secondary
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 school in the centre of
city
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the city
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. I have not finished your project yet because of important reasons. I have a bad headache now.
Hence
, I went to analyse
to
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hospital and they said that I
have
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had
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 to
cure
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be cured
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 in
hospital
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the hospital
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.
In addition
, I should stop my activity and work. I am very tired. So I have decided to relax in
peaceful
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a peaceful
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 place. I think that you will understand my sentences. I request that you should give
more
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me more
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 time to do it. Next week, I completely will finish
important
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an important
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 project. Thank you for your time. I am looking forward from to hearing you soon. Yours faithfully, Anna Steve
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that the structure of your letter is clear and logical, with a distinct opening, development of your situation, and a clear request or conclusion. Each paragraph should introduce or elaborate on a single idea.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter should start with a specific greeting to the person you are addressing, such as 'Dear Professor Smith,' if you know their name. If not, 'Dear Sir or Madam,' is acceptable but less personal. Close your letter appropriately, using 'Yours sincerely,' (if you know the name of the person) or 'Yours faithfully,' (if you do not know the name of the person).
Task Achievement
Address all parts of the task prompt. In your case, the letter should introduce yourself in the context of the course, explain your situation, and make a polite request for an extension. Ensure you've answered each part comprehensively.
Task Achievement
Adopt a suitable writing tone for formal correspondence. Avoid using informal language and make sure your reasons for requesting an extension are clearly explained and sound professional. It's also important to proofread your writing to avoid errors that might make your request seem less serious or professional.

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