1/ Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and the governments should make it free

the affordability

for

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higher education appears as one of the most arguable

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in

society

. The majority believe that education regulators should consider eliminating

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fees for all individuals, irrespective of their socio-economic background. I personally hold the opposing opinion about

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initiatives

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and will provide

further

explanation in

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essay. First and foremost, there are compelling reasons for the idea that everyone is encouraged to

pursuit

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college for free.

Since people

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believe that

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educational system would create a huge resource of skilled

labors

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for the country’s workforce. Augmenting the nation’s

competiveness

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competitiveness

through developing the

labor

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market is understandable, especially for developing countries. It ultimately enhances the entire

society

from

economy

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landscape to civilization.

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,

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regime is meaningful for the group of young people who are from underprivileged families, it helps

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less well-off

parent’s

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financial burden for their

kid

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kids

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pursuit of educational enrichment. People equipped with tertiary

degree

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degrees

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will stand a chance for a better job once

seeking for

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employment and

high

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chance to get a stable job after graduation rather than just a high school degree. Having said that, there

are

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a certain pronounced drawback of

free

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tuition

education policy in

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society

. On the individual level, students may lose their dedication and concentration in studying since they are no longer responsible for

tuition

fees.

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of

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themselves

in

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disciplines in order to get high scores and win

scholarship

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,

this

motivation is abolished. On the

society

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level,

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the elimination

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elimination

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eliminating

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school

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fee

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fees

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may put a strain on

government

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coffer

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coffers

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, leading to budget deficits,

tax

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hikes and

reduces

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welfare among others. In conclusion,

while

free

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tuition

fee regime may have

a

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apply

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several advantages

on

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society

. I believe its drawbacks

are

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far surpass

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the benefit

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benefit

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benefits

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this

policy may bring to a country.