The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assignments over the school year. What do you think of this trend?

Education
centers
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around the world have
tests
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with different styles. Nowadays, they have been a lot of concern on how
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should be done and there have been activities on shifting from dated
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dates to ongoing
assesments
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assessments
assessment
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how education centers should monitor and evaluate students over the year resulting in student benefits
as well as
lecturer
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. To
beging
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begin
with, the reason why schools are changing their curriculum is to increase the learning capacity of the students. Whenever there is assessment the will be more reading which will elevate the knowledge level of the learner.
For instance
, they are quizzes,assignments,
practices
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inside the class in which all studies and
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resulted in good
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compare
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to having dated
test
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. To add
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the student benefits, learners will use their brains all the
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rather than just using
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on the day before the exam. To simplify,
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studying will occur which is a great result and more new things will be focused
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assessment will
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decrease
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heavyweight of the teachers. Even though
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will be doing more jobs
due to
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assessment
but
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they are
also
benefiting from
this
.
For example
,
questionnaire
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was done
form
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the teacher asking what
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they
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from
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They replied saying that the workload will decrease because students tend to do 75% of
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while
them
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only do 25%.
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to
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, teachers will spend their time during the class doing more practice
question
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and solutions
instead
of only explaining the lecture and not having the capacity
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the complications of the lecture.
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of advantages
on
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having secret assessments in the class including increasing the knowledge level of the learning at the same time lecturer delivering the deep level
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of knowledge
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  • Comprehensive evaluation
  • High-stakes exams
  • Targeted support
  • Learning experiences
  • Mental state
  • Continuous assessment
  • Workload
  • Retention
  • Engage consistently
  • Time management
  • Disadvantage
  • Assessment pressure
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