The pie charts show the highest education level of women in Sri Lanka in 1965 and 1995.

The pie charts show the highest education level of women in Sri Lanka in 1965 and 1995.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts show the highest education level of women in Sri Lanka in 1965 and 1995.
The given charts illustrate different types of education achieved by Sri Lankan women in two different years. It can clearly be seen that the majority groups of female residents in 1965 only completed primary school,
while
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three decades later, more than half of them already held a certain qualification. In 1965, most women in Sri Lanka were either elementary graduates or did not have any education, with 44% and 35%, respectively.
Although
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a small group obtained a high school diploma (18%), only a few attained a graduate certification (3%), and none of them continued their studies afterwards.
In contrast
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to 30 years prior, in 1995,
this
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scenario changed exceptionally, with one in five women in Sri Lanka holding a post-graduate qualification, and no woman was unschooled.
Whereas
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more than a third of females acquired a bachelor’s degree, almost half of the population only finished 6-year and 12-year school, with 20% and 25% separately.

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