The charts below show the percentage of Australian men in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.
The graph below displays the percentages of males in three
age
categories who did have a job in 1984, 2001 and 2014 in Australia.
Overall
, it is obvious that age
categorie
35 to 44 showed the highest percentage versus Correct your spelling
categories
to
the Change preposition
apply
age
60-64 as they showed the lowest result.In contrast
, age
categorie
which increased gradually were people over 60-64.
In 1984 the Correct your spelling
categories
categorise
age
group from 15-19 illustrated about 55% but then
in 2014
it Add a comma
2014,
was
decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
for
10%.
Change preposition
to
Moreover
, individuals who demonstrated age
35-44 did not made
many changes over the years, they remained unchanged.What about the people aged 60-64 they went up Change the verb form
make
noticably
,from 27% to Correct your spelling
noticeably
appraoximantly
50%.Correct your spelling
approximately
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